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>AW MAN! I JUST GOT ALL 7 DRAGON BALLS BEJITA! YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS!
>ALMIGHTY DRAGON, REMOVE MY LIMBS AND MAKE ME BEJITA'S NUGGET BABY!
>AWWW RIGHT! TWO MORE WISHES TO GO TOO!
>DRAGON! SHRINK ME DOWN SO I CAN FIT INSIDE BEJITA-SAMAS FORESKIN AND SPHINCTER!
>HEHEHEH! LOOK HOW TINY I AM BEJITA!
>ALRIGHT DRAGON, NOW MAKE IT SO I SPEND 12 HOURS IN BEJITA'S ASS AND THEN GET TELEPORTED TO HIS FORESKIN, AND I SPEND 12 HOURS THERE TOO! AND IT NEVER ENDS, AND NOBODY CAN REMOVE ME! ALRIGHT! AND I CAN ONLY GET SUSTENANCE FROM BEJITA'S SMEGMA AND SHIT! IM GETTING EXCITED! OH, AND GIVE CHICHI BONE CANCER!
>MY WISHES GRANTED! TOO COOL SHENRON!
>WOW BEJITA, GUESS IT WAS FORESKIN FIRST HUH?
>OH MAN ITS WARM IN HERE! AND WET! YOURE SO VIRILE BEJITA! THE SMEGMA IS LIKE SHELOBS WEB! HAHAHAHA!
>MHMM, I JUST GOTTA TASTE IT! OH MAN! LIKE BITTER CHILLI DOGS WITH AN EXTRA HELPING OF SALT! A TRUE SAIYAN BANQUET! BON APPETITE BEJITA!
>MHMMFH! MHMM! IT FEELS GOOD TO KNOW CHICHI AND MY KIDS ARE BACK HOME, NOT YET SUSPECTING THE SLOW DEATH SENTENCE I JUST GAVE THEIR MOMMY! AHA! SHES PROBABLY IN PAIN AND THEYRE PANICKING WONDERING WHY! THEYRE PROBABLY DESPERATELY TRYING YO CONTACT ME, NOT REALISING I WISHED THIS UPON THEM AND THEN MADE MYSELF YOUR MAGGOT SLAVE!
>MYMMHHH! SO GOOD BEJITA! YOUR DRY CUM IS SO GOOD! I CANT WAIT TO LIVE ON IT FOREVER LIKE A PARASITE! LIKE THE LOATHSOME WORM I AM BEJITA!
>THIS IS MY TRUE SELF! AWW MAN! THIS IS WHAT I ALWAYS WANTED TO BE. BEING A CUM SHIT MAGGOT MADE TO WORSHIP YOUR BODY! TO LIVE OFF YOUR BODILY DISCHARGE IN PERPETUAL WORSHIP! AWWW MAN!
>THE STENCH OF FISH IS JUST AMAZING!
>WHAT THE? 12 HOURS ALREADY??? TIME FOR THE NIGHT SHIFT! AWWW MAN IT REEKS IN HERE!
>FART ON ME BEJITA, I NEED TO CHOKE ON YOUR FARTS! YOUR ANUS IS MY PLANET! YOUR BOWEL MOVEMENTS ARE MY WEATHER AND MY ECOSYSTEM! SEND A NOXIOUS GAS ATTACK MY WAY!
>IS THAT… A LITTLE NUGGET OF BEJITA'S SHIT? OH BOY IM THE LUCKIEST SAIYAN EVER! MHMMFH MHMM AWW MAN!
▶ No.350846
>>350834 (OP)Too long and not enough dynamism. You typically want to build up to the most extreme point as you go on. When you start there, and just stay there, the whole thing becomes monotonous. I know you didn't actually write this and just copy-pasted it from somewhere else, but it's still something to keep in mind.
▶ No.350852>>350859
>>350834 (OP)How did DBZ end? All I remember was:
>Vegeta and his lackeys invade earth and get shot by a farmer>Their king Friezer gets btfo<They got nothing else afterwards but pointless filler episodes>Cell shows up and gets btfo after dragging the fight after so many episodes>And some androids were there, of course the female one gets spared just to not upset the waifufags<They don't know what to do with the other characters>Majin Bu pops up with a dogleash tied to a green cockroach<This time the fucking thing develops schizophrenia and mutates into a slim rebellious version>Dies after Vegeta and Goku having an orgy but not really as it reincarnates into a shitskinThe fucking anime just didn't work unless they shit out an antagonist killing Goku and send him into purgatory as a B-plot, a B grade plot that also drags on the plot's arc.
▶ No.350859>>350877
>>350852By all rights, it ended with the Cell Saga. Goku died, Gohan got set up to be the new mega hero, the end. Everything afterwards was gay bullshit.
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>>350859Wrong shit eater. Everything after Namek was gay bullshit.
▶ No.350880
>>350877Wrong shit eater. Everything after Goku's wedding was gay bullshit.
▶ No.350890
DBGT is kino